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Chapter One – Monster inside Me – Brokencyde

I hate you, I hate you
I can't take this pain
I'm falling
Inside my head
I'm trying

I stared down at the thick wristband I was wherein. It was Red, Yellow and Purple; somehow I couldn't help but smile a little at the randomness of the colors as I fallowed my guide through the plain wooden doors, and that's when it hit me.

I'm stuck here, in the institution for crazies. Until I get better. Get better, I thought. So I'm insane now? Am I that bad? I sighed, well; I’m screwed up enough to have to be sent away from home just to go to some useless institution for ‘troubled teens’.

I sighed and looked at my wristband again; it was red, yellow and purple because those are the colors of my Issues. Red is for cutting, yellow is for suicide and purple for drug abuse. Without thinking I began to hum the song “purple pills”. Of course those aren't the only colors that are out there, as I was led down the stark gray hallway I saw people with Blue, Orange, Green, Pink, Black and White bands. I'll have to find out what they mean later. After a while I stopped looking at their wristbands but at their faces, many of them seemed withdrawn and depressed. So is this why they sent me here, I snorted. So I can become depressed and hate my life even more?

I was interrupted from my thoughts by the guide putting a hand on my shoulder and halting me before a door, well a door frame clothed in curtain. I guess they think we'll bang our heads against the door till we kill ourselves or something.

It took me only a few moments to understand everything about my room. It's white, has one small dresser, a ceiling light and no overly sharp surfaces. There was a small gray stain on the left side of the room and one of curtains by the window was tarnished, aside from that it was an overall plain room. It also had two beds; one was occupied by another girl. She looked at me and smiled, blond hair falling over her gray eyes, which she had downcast. I noticed she was dreadfully thin, I could see where her ribs ended even through the thick green turtleneck.

“You’re to stay in here until someone comes to tell you about the rules, here at we take these rules seriously.” He gave me a knowing glare; I gave him a smirk in reply. “This will be your room and Camile here is your roommate.” I nodded as the guild walked away.

“Hi, I'm Camile, but you already know that right?” She said; her voice was so faint that I could barely hear it.